Summarizing Exposition: Detailed Example

How should you do this week's summarizing homework? Follow these five steps:
      1. Read
      2. Choose main ideas
      3. Rewrite main ideas
      4. Create a paragraph
      5. Add details only if you need to

Step-by-step, here is an example.

 

Step 1: Read
Here is a reading. It's similar to the 4 readings in Chapter 3. Start by reading it. As you read, underline new vocabulary words if you can't understand the reading well; look them up in a dictionary before going on to the next step.

The Rise of Industrial America

In the decades following the Civil War, the United States emerged as an industrial giant. Old industries expanded and many new ones, including petroleum refining, steel manufacturing, and electrical power, emerged. Railroads expanded significantly, bringing even remote parts of the country into a national market economy.

Industrial growth transformed American society. It produced a new class of wealthy industrialists and a prosperous middle class. It also produced a vastly expanded blue collar working class. The labor force that made industrialization possible was made up of millions of newly arrived immigrants and even larger numbers of migrants from rural areas. American society became more diverse than ever before.

Not everyone shared in the economic prosperity of this period. Many workers were typically unemployed at least part of the year, and their wages were relatively low when they did work. This situation led many workers to support and join labor unions. Meanwhile, farmers also faced hard times as technology and increasing production led to more competition and falling prices for farm products. Hard times on farms led many young people to move to the city in search of better job opportunities.

Americans who were born in the 1840s and 1850s would experience enormous changes in their lifetimes. Some of these changes resulted from a sweeping technological revolution. Their major source of light, for example, would change from candles, to kerosene lamps, and then to electric light bulbs. They would see their transportation evolve from walking and horse power to steam-powered locomotives, to electric trolley cars, to gasoline-powered automobiles. Born into a society in which the vast majority of people were involved in agriculture, they experienced an industrial revolution that radically changed the ways millions of people worked and where they lived. They would experience the migration of millions of people from rural America to the nation's rapidly growing cities.

 

Step 2: Separate major ideas from minor details
Highlight or underline ideas. Don't underline examples. I will use purple type for the major ideas below.

Hint: Topic sentences are usually the first sentence of a paragraph!

The Rise of Industrial America

In the decades following the Civil War, the United States emerged as an industrial giant. Old industries expanded and many new ones, including petroleum refining, steel manufacturing, and electrical power, emerged. Railroads expanded significantly, bringing even remote parts of the country into a national market economy.

Industrial growth transformed American society. It produced a new class of wealthy industrialists and a prosperous middle class. It also produced a vastly expanded blue collar working class. The labor force that made industrialization possible was made up of millions of newly arrived immigrants and even larger numbers of migrants from rural areas. American society became more diverse than ever before.

Not everyone shared in the economic prosperity of this period. Many workers were typically unemployed at least part of the year, and their wages were relatively low when they did work. This situation led many workers to support and join labor unions. Meanwhile, farmers also faced hard times as technology and increasing production led to more competition and falling prices for farm products. Hard times on farms led many young people to move to the city in search of better job opportunities.

Americans who were born in the 1840s and 1850s would experience enormous changes in their lifetimes. Some of these changes resulted from a sweeping technological revolution. Their major source of light, for example, would change from candles, to kerosene lamps, and then to electric light bulbs. They would see their transportation evolve from walking and horse power to steam-powered locomotives, to electric trolley cars, to gasoline-powered automobiles. Born into a society in which the vast majority of people were involved in agriculture, they experienced an industrial revolution that radically changed the ways millions of people worked and where they lived. They would experience the migration of millions of people from rural America to the nation's rapidly growing cities.

 

Step 3: Look at the major ideas separately from the reading
Rewrite these few ideas. You may want to first copy the sentences exactly from the reading, and then put them in your own words. Below I show both the copied sentence and my own sentences.

In the decades following the Civil War, the United States emerged as an industrial giant

Industrial growth transformed American society

American society became more diverse

Not everyone shared in the economic prosperity

Americans who were born in the 1840s and
1850s would experience enormous changes

The industrial power of the U.S. grew a lot after the Civil War was over

This increase of industry changed American society

Society started to be more diverse

There was more wealth in society, but not for all people

People born in the middle of the 19th century saw their country change drastically

Step 4. Finally! Write these few ideas as a new paragraph. Remember, your assignment is to use 5 or fewer sentences.

The industrial power of the U.S. grew a lot after the Civil War was over. This increase of industry changed American society by making it more diverse. There was more wealth in society, but not for all people. People born in the middle of the 19th century saw their country change drastically.

 

Step 5. Read your paragraph - check to see if it clear. Do you need to add a detail or two? When I re-read this summary, I think I need to explain it just a little bit more. The bold type below shows what I added.

The industrial power of the U.S. grew a lot after the Civil War was over. This increase of industry changed American society by making it more diverse. There was more wealth in society, but not for all people: workers and farmers suffered. People born in the middle of the 19th century saw their country change drastically.

 

Congratulations - you are done!