Summarizing Exposition: Detailed Example
How should you do
this week's summarizing homework? Follow these five steps:
- Read
- Choose main ideas
- Rewrite main ideas
- Create a paragraph
- Add details only
if you need to
Step-by-step, here is an
example.
Step 1: Read
Here is a reading. It's similar to the 4 readings in Chapter 3.
Start by reading it. As you read, underline new vocabulary words
if you can't understand the reading well; look them up in a dictionary
before going on to the next step. |
The Rise of Industrial America
In the decades following the Civil War, the United States emerged
as an industrial giant. Old industries expanded and many new ones,
including petroleum refining, steel manufacturing, and electrical
power, emerged. Railroads expanded significantly, bringing even
remote parts of the country into a national market economy.
Industrial growth transformed American society. It produced a new
class of wealthy industrialists and a prosperous middle class. It
also produced a vastly expanded blue collar working class. The labor
force that made industrialization possible was made up of millions
of newly arrived immigrants and even larger numbers of migrants
from rural areas. American society became more diverse than ever
before.
Not everyone shared in the economic prosperity of this period.
Many workers were typically unemployed at least part of the year,
and their wages were relatively low when they did work. This situation
led many workers to support and join labor unions. Meanwhile, farmers
also faced hard times as technology and increasing production led
to more competition and falling prices for farm products. Hard times
on farms led many young people to move to the city in search of
better job opportunities.
Americans who were born in the 1840s and 1850s would experience
enormous changes in their lifetimes. Some of these changes resulted
from a sweeping technological revolution. Their major source of
light, for example, would change from candles, to kerosene lamps,
and then to electric light bulbs. They would see their transportation
evolve from walking and horse power to steam-powered locomotives,
to electric trolley cars, to gasoline-powered automobiles. Born
into a society in which the vast majority of people were involved
in agriculture, they experienced an industrial revolution that radically
changed the ways millions of people worked and where they lived.
They would experience the migration of millions of people from rural
America to the nation's rapidly growing cities. |
Step 2: Separate
major ideas from minor details
Highlight or underline ideas. Don't underline examples. I will
use purple type for the major ideas below.
Hint: Topic sentences are usually the first sentence of a paragraph! |
The Rise of Industrial America
In the decades following the
Civil War, the
United States emerged as an industrial giant.
Old industries expanded and many new ones, including petroleum
refining, steel manufacturing, and electrical power, emerged.
Railroads expanded significantly, bringing even remote parts of
the country into a national market economy.
Industrial growth transformed
American society. It produced a new class
of wealthy industrialists and a prosperous middle class. It also
produced a vastly expanded blue collar working class. The labor
force that made industrialization possible was made up of millions
of newly arrived immigrants and even larger numbers of migrants
from rural areas. American
society became more diverse than ever
before.
Not everyone shared in the
economic prosperity of this period. Many
workers were typically unemployed at least part of the year, and
their wages were relatively low when they did work. This situation
led many workers to support and join labor unions. Meanwhile,
farmers also faced hard times as technology and increasing production
led to more competition and falling prices for farm products.
Hard times on farms led many young people to move to the city
in search of better job opportunities.
Americans who were born in
the 1840s and 1850s would experience enormous changes
in their lifetimes. Some of these changes resulted from a sweeping
technological revolution. Their major source of light, for example,
would change from candles, to kerosene lamps, and then to electric
light bulbs. They would see their transportation evolve from walking
and horse power to steam-powered locomotives, to electric trolley
cars, to gasoline-powered automobiles. Born into a society in
which the vast majority of people were involved in agriculture,
they experienced an industrial revolution that radically changed
the ways millions of people worked and where they lived. They
would experience the migration of millions of people from rural
America to the nation's rapidly growing cities. |
Step 3: Look at the
major ideas separately from the reading
Rewrite these few ideas. You may want to first copy the sentences
exactly from the reading, and then put them in your own words.
Below I show both the copied sentence and my own sentences. |
In
the decades following the Civil War, the United States
emerged as an industrial giant
Industrial growth transformed
American society
American society became more diverse
Not everyone shared in the economic
prosperity
Americans who were born in the
1840s and
1850s would experience enormous changes |
The industrial power of the U.S. grew a lot after
the Civil War was over
This increase of industry changed American society
Society started to be more diverse
There was more wealth in society, but not for all people
People born in the middle of the 19th century saw their country
change drastically |
Step 4. Finally! Write these few ideas
as a new paragraph. Remember, your assignment is to use 5 or fewer sentences.
The industrial power of the U.S. grew a lot after the Civil War
was over. This increase of industry changed American society by
making it more diverse. There was more wealth in society, but not
for all people. People born in the middle of the 19th century saw
their country change drastically.
Step 5. Read your paragraph - check to
see if it clear. Do you need to add a detail or two? When I re-read this
summary, I think I need to explain it just a little bit more. The bold
type below shows what I added.
The industrial power of the U.S. grew a lot after
the Civil War was over. This increase of industry changed American
society by making it more diverse. There was more wealth in society,
but not for all people: workers and farmers suffered.
People born in the middle of the 19th century saw their country
change drastically.
Congratulations - you are done!
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